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Before and After: Sally's Dress by Hayakain Before and After: Sally's Dress by Hayakain
Needed to warm up for art for the day, so redid this oldie a little bit :D
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Queen-Ystella Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't really compare them, as you were going for totally different things in each picture.

The old one is a more conventional colouring style with much more details but the new one is going for a more simplistic and easier to draw style.

What would make the best look in my opinion is the colouring style of the old one with the line art of the new one.

Then again can't really compare as they are so different.

I'm actually torn between which I like more because well, they both were meant to achieve different visual looks.
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manlyhouse00 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
INTERESTING!Hetalia Switzerland Nosebleed 
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goombablood Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
The only thing the newer one has better is shading on the dress. Everything about the older one is better.

-lineart is rougher

-that dress still defies gravity. It needs something to hold it up, like shoulder straps, or make it end higher up the breasts so the breasts will hold it up.

-the front/back is inconsistant. In the backside the middle is higher up and the butt is farther down than the front side. I recommend copy and paste the front side and flip it. Then use that as an outline for the back side. That way both will be consistant.

-even less room for organs. Where the hell is her stomach?

-life-less eyes. The way the eyes are drawn makes her look lifeless, darker pupils will fix that really easily.

-tumor thighs. There is no way she could walk with such large thighs, they would keep hitting eachother. Tone it down a bit.

-her tail is slapped onto her dress. The tail starts at the tailbone, which is right where the start of the butt is. Move the cut of the dress down or the butt/tail higher and it will be fixed.

-the black lines on her butt make it look like the dress is wedged up there, it looks unnatural.
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Some interesting points. Many thanks.
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:iconrabbitmaskedman:
rabbitmaskedman Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
The new one looks like it was outlined in MS paint... Yeah, old one wins by a long one...
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Disagree, but to each his own. Plus you've not been very objective since I turned you down, so there's that.
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DDRmails Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
strange but - old is better.
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I disagree, but to each his own
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DDRmails Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
well, my freshlook tells me that the left picture is more direct, fine lines, light and shade, smooth contours, more detailed, lively look left and doll look right. and the colors of course! Yes, to each his own, and for me - left.
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Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Mine tells me left has wonky ears, overlong face, bug eyes, and weird collarbone positioning. :D
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:iconsonic808:
Sonic808 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great remake!
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:iconlord-kiyo:
Lord-Kiyo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014
I have to admit, the Before one looks more detailed. and cleaner.
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
i personally like a bit less clean lines :D new could have used more detail tho
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:iconsonicxd1998:
sonicXD1998 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like bove styles, but the left one looks more bitchy to say and the right one more tender :)
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:iconsiska49:
Siska49 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice improvement. ;)
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:icontigerfestivals:
Tigerfestivals Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the hair better in the older one, but I like how you've got more line variation now.
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Wanderer619 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Looks Great ^^
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:iconshadow-ichigo:
Shadow-Ichigo Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
I love it man ^^
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:iconionic44:
Ionic44 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i actually like the lineart of the left one a little more honestly :)
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Beauty :lovely: 
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:iconcorfaisus:
Corfaisus Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The scary thing is that now it's even more anatomically incorrect. 83
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I disagree lol but it's ok, I'm not worried about it 8D
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:iconantcow:
antcow Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
I like the figure that this Sally cuts, but shes missing the cross :3
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I forgot it :B
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:iconantcow:
antcow Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Its a great pic either way.
You draw a fine woman of her :3
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:iconnickworcester:
nickworcester Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student General Artist
My opinion? The dress improved some, but that's it.
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:iconhayakain:
Hayakain Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
is kewl, i think moreso than that but you're entitled to your opinion :)
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:iconbelyeucaleb:
belyeucaleb Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Damn.... she looks sexy! ^^
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:iconsmokeyandthebandit:
SmokeyandtheBandit Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
She looks a lot nicer then the old version.
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:iconstockings300:
stockings300 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Neat!
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:iconmadmontyzuma:
MadMontyZuma Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Good lord, what keeps that on?
MT
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James-Dark-Blue-Wolf Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
Very hot and sexy!
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:iconsonicdude645:
Sonicdude645 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
The time has gone by Fast.
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:icondragonrider1227:
Dragonrider1227 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
new one is totally better :)
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:iconcorfaisus:
Corfaisus Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
By how much lolololololololol

But seriously, when was before?
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Dragonrider1227 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014
no clue XD
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